Thursday, February 15, 2007

Shopping Mall (Villanelle Poem)

The mall is so very fun
There is so much to do there
Especially when I find a great deal, it means I have won

Everywhere I look people are having a blast
Families and children all shopping together
The mall is so very fun

There is shoppers here and their I can see them everywhere
My hands are full of bags and stuff I have bought
Especially when I find a great deal, it means I have won

Going from store to store takes a toll on my feet
It makes me feel as if I need to sit down and eat
The mall is so very fun

I use my brain power and shopping skill
Trying to find that perfect pair of shoes
Especially when I find a great deal, it means I have won

It seems if I will never go home
The mall is so very stressful at the end of the day
The mall is so very fun
Especially when I find a great deal, it means I have won

1 comment:

**Kara** said...

OMG Tiffany you should make writing poems your carrer!!! AHHHHH it's so good. Loves it!!! PS we're going to see Bridge to Teribithia...don't forget it!!